lost for you




lost in you
candles burning
on a road never known

memories
burnt in my skin
words talking

soft in the night
and you
inside walls closing





Poetry by kath
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Written on 2007-12-08 at 08:01

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Rob Graber
The propositional switch from "for" in the title to "in" in the first line is an enigma. Also, the "walls closing" at the end convey a sense of impending doom: one so wants to have options... In all, a fascinating write!
2007-12-12


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
This is a powerful text of the condition love takes us to thisis tremendouds poetry at its best rgds Mike
2007-12-08


Amanda K
love the contradition.
2007-12-08