Early fog



In this early fog

I wouldnt believe it was morning

in this early fog

all dreams stayed in bed

in this early fog

I pretend to be awake

in this early fog

the day soon begin





Words by Adeleine
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Written on 2008-01-11 at 06:26

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Stan Cooper The PoetBay support member heart!
Adeline...lovely poem

If the fog presents an excuse for relaxing in bed, three cheers
for the fog..

Stan
2008-01-11


Kathy Lockhart
nicely done. I love the simplicity of it and the repetition. It's very effective. There is poignancy in your message.
2008-01-11


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
Adeleine this is a very clever poem with the subtle punch line so effective

well done rgds mike keep writing here the site needs poets of your talent well done
rgds mike
2008-01-11