This is a poem i made by myself....i think its not too bad........what do u think of it? :)


I'll Always Love You

Love is sweet
Love is true
Love is what I'll give you
I'll always count on you to hold my heart
Because I know you'll never rip it apart
Even if I find someone new
Don't forget I'll always love you





Poetry by jaz
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Written on 2008-02-02 at 03:42

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Edgar John Jackson
It is so sweet, but correct a grammar mistake, u can't say: I'll give to you, it is I'll give you. Great one!!!!!!!
2008-02-17


Elle The PoetBay support member heart!
cute :)
2008-02-02