It is better not to define certain relationships- certain special feeling- and just let them be as they are, pure, pristine and spontaneous…


Let Us Not Define This Feeling…

Let us not define this feeling
Let it continue its touch healing
Let it warm our souls always
Let us never part our ways
Let the stars in firmament shine
On this union- yours and mine:

You look deep into my eyes
Know the meaning of my sighs
I soothe you with my gentle touch
Ease you out of the clutch
Fate has entangled you in grudge
So as not to let it smudge
Your heart’s purity, your soul’s serenity…

Let’s just be each other’s solace
Let us live like this with grace…

You bring me a waft of fresh air
I give you a feeling of cheer…



Author: Zoya Zaidi
Aligarh (UP), India
Copyright ©: Zoya Zaidi
25.07.2007





Poetry by Zoya Zaidi
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2008-11-17


penfold18
Somethings are best left without analyzing its what makes them special and retains the magic.
2008-03-02


Clarence
Great poem. You discribe so nice the foundation of true love. Shine on!!!
2008-02-23


Aisha Razem
Zoya one of the most active women poets, in Love Poems through our hearts it comes your words, just like the cold dancing breeze to ease !!
You've done as always in your beauty and lightening the Indian women papers!!


Aisha

Love
2008-02-23



Beautiful and true: there are feeling that express themselves wonderfully, without any need to be defined!
2008-02-23


Stan Cooper The PoetBay support member heart!
Zoya...these feelings don't need defining...just feel them
and be happy...

very sensitive write, as always, Zoya...

xxxx Stan
2008-02-23


Kathy Lockhart
oh I agree!!! such beauty and so much peace comes through your very wise words Zoya. xx Kathy
2008-02-22


Rob Graber
Relationships: there is a time to think about them, and a time to just experience them too. This poem celebrates the latter setniment: Most definitely not in the mood for defining...
2008-02-22


Elle The PoetBay support member heart!
I feel happy when I read this, it calms me, as I feel love should - of course the passion courses through us, but when you are with that someone special, only they can calm you. Beautiful, I hope you are well Zoya, I have missed your presence here

Emma x
2008-02-22