Unconditional


Life of love

Love is water
that glides
over rocks
and pebbles
thrown at it.

Passion is
a bubble
that bursts
at a
touch.

Let passion
float on love
If it dies
the water
has life.




Poetry by Neelima
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Written on 2008-03-13 at 09:46

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amandeep
what a beautiful poem ... i liked it..thats tremendous thought...i am glad while leaving i read a great text. very well written

truely it was an unconditional....

Overall: 5
2008-06-12


V.V.Ramesh
i liked it neelima, well written..:)

Language: 5
Format: 5
Mood: 5
Overall: 5
2008-03-13


Elle The PoetBay support member heart!
I like this poem a lot, beautiful as only unconditional love can be

Elle x
2008-03-13