a poem i wrote to jill H in my high school days


(LIW) love I Wrote

the girl i can look upon
the girl that can make my problems be all gone

she rids my pain
her persence keeps me sane

perfection and beuty combined
I love her, looks, her laugh, her mind

cant describe how i feel
all i know is that its love and its real

thoughts of you float
dreams of you and me i wrote

still think of ways to make you happy
so memories are not all crappy

i need you in my life
So I can forget the sarrow filed strife

Needing your heart
from the very start

my mistake please make it a void
so we can move on with the good and avoid

the things that make is mad
so we can handle the bad

live together havind a chance to remember
about those times january through december

year after year something that we shared
luaghed and showed how much we cared

i dream of you every night
invisioning the meaning of the light

finding that your the only one for me
im so glad thats the way things are meant to be



Poetry by cory Crook
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Written on 2008-04-10 at 07:04

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Elle The PoetBay support member heart!
The start of young love and all the promises and hopes - sometimes we forget the fervour of young love - but I remember the exquisite agony and the hilarious moments. Enjoyed

Elle x
2008-04-10