You

Just another party,
full of all those nasty mistakes.
And all those things I regret,
you're the only one who keeps me awake.
All those filthy secrets,
you're the only worth keeping.
Still I wanna scream it out,
to all the girls might be interested.
And I want it to be special,
just for you and me.
And I regret it so much,
and I can't stop crying.
Can't keep my head in one place,
but you're allways there.
And the thoughts won't leave me alone,
their hunting me.
And I'm such a whore for those things,
I did with everyone but you.
But I want to.

And just to you.



Poetry by baby Blue
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Written on 2008-05-13 at 02:40

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Rob Graber
This could use some polishing, but it shows good insight and spirit I think. A word seems to have been omitted from lines 4 and 6 ("the only [one]"); line 14 doesn't quite make sense: and the next to last line seems to need "everything with you." Don't be discouraged; this is a good effort!
2008-05-13