its raining all about


i am the rain

Sometimes I feel I am the rain,
Torrential rain...
Pouring down upon you
With all the passion of my being,
Soaking the parched earth of your being...
Quenching centuries long of thirst,
Overwhelming, overflowing,
Flooding you with all my love,
Engulfing you in my being,
Till we are all but one...

Sometimes I feel, I am
A tender soft drizzle...
Touching gently your cheeks,
Slide tenderly down to your lips,
Caress your hot glowing skin,
Wallowing in your touch,
Melting softly with your touch,
Evaporate into the air,
& Leave you longing for more...
Myself all the while,
Savouring sweet longing of yore...

Sometimes I feel, I am
That tiny drop of rain
In the vapour of your breath,
Breathing along with you,
Constantly inside you,
Going along with you,
Your every move and stride,
On a dark and gloomy day,
In a solid, dependable way...

On a hot summer day,
I cool your burning brow,
Sooth your troubled frown...
Yes, I think, I am
That lucky rain of spring
On a hot summer day,
Longing to be with you
In every which way...

Some time I feel, I am,
Upon the parched earth of your being'
That very summer Rain.




Poetry by mohammad
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Written on 2008-07-31 at 17:33

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Phyllis J. Rhodes
This piece of word art touched my heart. It would melt me if the one I love said these words to me. They are like rain. They are a teasing cloud burst on a sunny day that brings thunder and lightening, then bursts forth with fury then goes away, leaving a clean smell and shimmer upon the ground.
2008-09-25


Bob
This is a lovely love poem, echoing with old Indian voices like Rabindranath Tagore.
Your Englis is very good, probably better than mine, however, I have a few suggestions:
Quenching centuries long of thirst should be, I think: Quenching centuries of long thirst
Slide tenderly down to your lips, should be: Sliding tenderly down to your lips,
Caress your hot glowing skin, should be: Caressing your hot glowing skin,
Evaporate into the air, should be: Evaporating into the air,

But once again: I loved the poem!
Bengt
2008-07-31