I wrote this after a girl I was dating broke up with me, That was around 5 months ago. So yeah, the poem is old...ish... But, until I write something new, I might as weel share some of older, but still good, works, right? I thought so. Haha.


Breathe No More

I can't believe I trusted you,
even though you seemed so true...
When I met you, I ended my fight,
and I thought with you, everything would be right...

I went out of my way,
to be with you everyday...
You created one hell of a crime,
wasting all of my time...

Because of all your lying,
my heart is dying...
You exposed all my fears,
so in the rain, I cry the blackest tears...

Laying in my bed,
all I can think about is having a bullet in my head...
In the game of life, I have the losing score,
because, I breathe... no more...



Poetry by Raven Nero Michaels
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Written on 2008-08-05 at 17:54

Tags Life  Sorrow 

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Esti D-G
very moving poem! Keep 'em coming!
2008-08-09


amandeep
this is quite touching one...yeah we all would be glad to read your poetry..it doesnt matter it is old or new...hahahahah// am i right??

nice to see you here with us

nice poetry...lovely ..and about love

regards
amandeep
2008-08-05