i appologise, i'm in quite the bad mood.
i feel like being sarcastic


you little deviant

bend me to fit your slanted views
blur me to appease your multiple personalities
dip me in water
chain me to your defenses
paint me up
cut me down
fold me hold me
burn me break me
taunt me
haunt me
leave me with this blackened hole
after all..i am strong.
i can take it.



Poetry by dre
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Written on 2008-08-08 at 04:11

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Stan Cooper The PoetBay support member heart!
Dre...it's good to get those hurt feelings out in the open,
and you did it beautifully...

xxxx Stan
2008-08-08


Kathy Lockhart
no need for apologies; poetry is the perfect way to express the state of mind we are in. you made a powerful statement through your poem.
2008-08-08


Joe Fern
reminds me of a certain song, i forget which one.
great job, what is poetry but the outpouring of the feelings in ones mind at that moment
2008-08-08