We start writing this  2008-05-04  and now it's ready! So Ladies and Gentleman here it comes! :)


A feather on your pillow ( a cowrite by NSW + Kathy Lockhart)

 




Eyes wide shut reminisce.

An aftertaste that lingers
and enters the sphere
of the broken spirits.


Softly ethereal;
the mind touches
the chords of the heart

the pieces of what's left behind
gathering the ideals of sleep
creating a palette for creation

of lost hopes
dreamt ceaselessly . . .

         ¤
Silent dreams
gently enter

ethereal touch.

Awaken by the morning sun!

Playful sunrays
perpetuate growth

find their place
through the skin


A new day has begun!
Open your eyes
and shine!

 





Poetry by night soul woman The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2008-08-15 at 09:48

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Dee Daffodil
Lovely piece that the two of you have written together ! Nicely done!
Hugs,
Dee
2009-09-09


Kathy Lockhart
Carmen you presented this beautifully. It was my pleasure to write with you and hope we can do it again sometime. hugs kathy
2008-08-20


Phyllis J. Rhodes
It is rare to find two artists who are so atuned to the whisper of Creation that they become a part of it. Could we call this a word miracle? I think we could.
2008-08-15



It is such a joy for me to see this co-write!
A blend of expressions, scented with warmth and hope...
2008-08-15



Well worth waiting for. A beautiful collaboration girls, well done. I especially liked '
Softly ethereal;
the mind touches
the chords of the heart

but every word was perfectly place on this ethereal pillow poem.

Loved it.

Smiling at you both

Tai x
2008-08-15