Teenager, its who i am i suppose


What its really like


Today I am feeling amazing,
Last night was far from the same,
The morning of yesterday was quite exciting,
But the day before that was quite lame.

Do you like to roller on coasters?
To spin and do turns and drops?
Become a teenager, become a young poser!
Be the child who hopes rides don't stop.



Poetry by Joe Fern
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Written on 2008-08-21 at 03:30

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Elle The PoetBay support member heart!
definitely, always keep the child within, it makes life so much more exciting

Elle x
2008-08-21


Phyllis J. Rhodes
This has the energy and originality of a teenager. When I try to be one by dancing or even one day trying a cart wheel, my body cusses me out. I really like this poem. It's neato! Or I should say, this is bad, dog, really bad.
2008-08-21


limber junctionson
yes i do,
always good to be reminded to think.
2008-08-21


Kathy Lockhart
this is very clever. I love the rhythm of it all.

i am far from a teenager but I am an oldager who still rides roller coasters but never the whirly kind. I am dizzy enough as it is. : D kathy
2008-08-21