ken d williams
Anoop , your ,poem/story spekes of all the world. Each nation , of the world , poets can write the a similar storys. Before words were needed , many wrote in pitches. Painted upon the walls of caves , or upon the rockes. Deep underground , shaird by but a few. Maybe they desided to insure we would ijn times to come , would read rthear story. Each telling thear storeys of their nation. Of thearc daily laifes , hunting , forigeing , gathering. Of those who came to conker occupy , their nation. Of pease and war , of love , yes , hate . But all of thear daily lifes , most of all.

Thank you Anoop fore your wonderful well writtan pitches in words.

Ken ( D Williams )
2008-09-20

lan
poetry should live without all weapons to kill each other.
poetry should be with rivers and rains. nicely said.
2008-09-01

Kathy Lockhart
very emotive and full of imagery.
2008-08-28

maxmedo
When i read the title i was preparing myself to read a story but when i read ur few lines i felt that i read one. I like the way u expressed with only few words lots feeling

~max
2008-08-28