this poem is inspired by Elle...




Anxiety Attack

 

Walls are collapsing,

closing in,

my chest is crackling,

i breathe faster,

harder,

beats chase one another...

 

*ANXIETY ATTACK*

you lay your head on my chest,

your dark black hair *cocoa* buries my face

and you hush me to sleep

hushhhhh

* * * * * * * * * * *

* * * * * * * *

* * * * * *

* * * *

"I love you"

the hurricane in my mind is resting

umm

hmm

i hear you breathing

and i

i

i

slee...

..eeeee...

..p

ha*

 

~Max





Poetry by maxmedo
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Written on 2008-08-28 at 14:40

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2008-11-18


Esti D-G
lovely piece Max!
enjoyed reading it v.much,
luvestix

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2008-09-20



That is what a good woman can do for the right man max! loved it's hope filled message....Elle is most inspiring indeed.

Smiling at you

Tai

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2008-09-03


Kathy Lockhart
this is very well composed and formated. I love the visual or concrete poetry. It is like a story with pictures. Very well done Max. Applaud and bookmarked. : ) kathy
2008-08-28


Elle The PoetBay support member heart!
I'm so glad that my poem could inspire you Max as this is simply wonderful, a really soothing poem and beautifully presented - I can feel my breath quieting and peace and calm taking me over, thank you for this

Elle x

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2008-08-28


Phyllis J. Rhodes
Soothing as a mother's breast. Wonderful.
2008-08-28