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An Absence of Love

Salty is the taste of her lips.
Her blond hair tangled by the wind.
Brown the color of her sun-baked skin
And smooth is the shape of her hips.

Long and shapely are her naked legs.
Her breasts full, round, and firm--
Her body would make any man squirm
And bend on his knees as he begs.

Golden stars glimmer in her hair
And sapphires glow through her eyes.
She is perfection; and yet she cries
For the ocean that rejected her care.

Gone are the lovely emerald fins.
And missing is her majestic tail.
All of her scales are gone as well,
As are her sparkling contagious grins.

A mermaid purged from the sea
Becomes a woman in all of her ways.
She lives now as death counts the days
Wondering just where she should be.

Her cries are like the ocean's spray
Leaving a rainbow of prism drops
On cratered cliffs and their stony tops
Spotted in her tears silently to say...

Come now, my beloved, to find me.
Come make me forever thine own.
Teach me how to live before I'm gone.
Hear me as I'm wasting, never more to be.

She laid upon the desolate sand
and took her last breath and sighed
Her beloved came not as she sadly died
Proffering her pale,  
Empty,  
Opened hand...

 





Poetry by Kathy Lockhart
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Written on 2009-08-19 at 01:35

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SecretWords The PoetBay support member heart!
That last sentence... it sent shivers down my spine.
2009-08-19


Phyllis J. Rhodes
As written here, beauty is tragedy and tragedy beauty. A story we don't want to read, but must for its power to engage and move the reader. Congratulations on the form. It is fascinating. Another work of art.
2009-08-19



A beautifully sad and touching poem Kathy, not every story has a happy ending I guess.

The absence of love, is killer in all deeds.

Great perception presented in fine poetic form. She will swim again in her next life form.

Smiling at you

Tai
2009-08-19


Morpheus
Kathy, this is beautiful and so very sad. The imagery is wonderful. Thank you for sharing a part of your soul.
2009-08-19


Rob Graber
I enjoyed this sad, well-told tale; nice job with the rhyme scheme!
2009-08-19


Eli The PoetBay support member heart!
So sad and deeply touching.
2009-08-19