Consequence.

you weren't
supposed to matter to
me

you were just
supposed to be someone
i knew who
had a crush on me

someone my friends and
i laughed about as
we discussed your flirtation

someone who liked
me who i liked but not
the same way

someone
just someone

but then tonight we had a talk
and i came to realize something
new, a rare potential

and everything made sense...

but then you told
me the truth

and now i
am lost and
heartbroken

because

the truth is
you could matter so much to me; and
the truth is
i never mattered to you at all



Words by WildGoose
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Written on 2008-08-29 at 08:13

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Candily
Your formulation is pretty much like the modern swedish poetry. And I really like that. Especially:

"someone who liked
me who i liked but not
the same way

someone
just someone"
2008-08-29


Kathy Lockhart
oh no. Your writing is so very good. I always enjoy what you bring here. But now I am so sad because of the turn of events in this situation you write about in this poem. However, the poem is done so well. And as far as the love interest goes, just wait some day you will find the one just right for you and you for him. And the feelings will be mutual. It is tough going through rejection. But know you are a lovely person and deserve the best. : ) kathy
2008-08-29



Irony can be so sad sometime my friend! seems like you both served your purpose and it wasn't to be forever. you had a lucky break! Smiling at you, Tai
2008-08-29