Whitewall sanctuary

If that bright white wall
could be my sobriety of mind
I would be saving some sanity
and someday standing tall

If that mighty metal door
could be my mental masque
I could be looking happy
and sometimes know what for



Poetry by Cr4Ky
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Written on 2008-09-07 at 17:27

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Kathy Lockhart
powerful imagery here!
2008-09-09



Intriqueing text indeed Whitehall to me, suggests Embassy, which is a sanctuary in foreign lands....What calms our minds is such white walls which only we can paint and maintain. Wow! this poem has only two stanza's but it's levels are mind boggling.

It is good to know just why we smile inside and out.

All the best to you

Tai
2008-09-09