Forsaken

Been ignored and mocked,

spent alot of time in life's gutter,

lied to alotta times,

been victimized by false rumours,

controlled by fake love,


Not listened to,

totally forgotten at times,

nights sitting in my bed just thinking,

facing my problems when everyone sleeps,

in loneliness I fight best,


Not able to do anything,

not able to help,

left in the cold of the bad things happenings,

neither loved of hated,

Forsaken





Poetry by Alexander
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Written on 2006-01-16 at 00:42

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penfold18
The very word forsaken gives off dark shivers, alone, forgotten,not to notice the existance,no one is truely alone ,someone will ease the pain :-)
2006-01-16


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
hi there

This poem is so powerful and true of life generally but take heart you will rise again as Zoya said

regards Mike
2006-01-16


Zoya Zaidi
When you fall you rise the highest!
When you crawl, you walk the fastest!
When you drown, you always come up!
When you are down, you always cher up!
When despair, hope always comes up!
When you're lonely, someone will come up!
And say:"Hi! Rise and cheer up!"

(((((hugs for theexcellent write, Alex.))))

I am there with you, sweet heart,
I am looking over you,
I am looking out for you!!!
Don't despair!!!
Love,xxx, Zoya
2006-01-16


BlueyedSoul
Excellent write....liked the end...just forsaken...leaves one feeling the pain of being just deserted and abandoned.

~Cindy
2006-01-16