Inspiration was brought to me by Liz munro.. a real poet with a heart of gold!


a life to build

though stones may fall
in flames and hatred
though your eyes are loosing
too the pain of life

a life too build is always dancing
inside your heart, strong as God

though skies are falling
and the world is lost
in the dark of night

a life to build is always dancing
inside your heart, strong as light

and as you crawl
on flaming ground
you`ll lift your head

and smile...



Poetry by Cr4Ky
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Written on 2006-01-16 at 02:22

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Zoya Zaidi
"and as you crawl
on flaming ground
you`ll lift your head

and smile..."

Simply brilliant!! love this line!!

Very poetic !!!
Very positive!!!
Cr4Ky!
(((((hugs))))
Love, xxx, Zoya
2006-01-16


liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
I love the last line still 'smiling'.
Great flow and word choice.
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5/5
Liz
2006-01-16