Sweetheart don't go....

My Sweetheart,
I am sorry i screamed at you
I am sorry i was mean
I didnt mean to hurt you
I didnt want you to cry ..
I shdnt have told you
mean and twisted things.
I didnt mean to fight
I failed to keep my cool
But it was too hard to try


I know its a break for you
and that you must go..
But Korea is too for away.
It would snap my soul
Nine months are too long
To live with just memories of you ..

Who would look at me so lovingly,
till i blush so red?
who would Say that i should gym,
when i eat that extra slice of bread?
Who would fight with me ,
over that last slice of Pizza?
Who would not let me eat more than one samosa?
Who would wrestle with me in the park
Who would make me run..
Who will play Holi with me ..
On Diwali we shall miss all the fun.
I would be all alone for Christmas..
Wht wd I do on new year?
When would you share with me .
Another bottle of beer ?
when shall I smoke with you again?
Who would poke my "Tumma",
and call me funny names?
It wd be so long before
I can see you make those cute faces again.


Sweetheart please dont go
I promise you I will be good
Without you I am nothing
Nothing feels good.
Korea is too far off
You know I cant come along
Sweetheart please dont go
nine months are just too long :((




Poetry by Dona
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Written on 2008-10-05 at 17:56

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Sun.Moon.Stars.Rain
=/ your heartbreak really shows through here...an intensely moving poem. welcome to the bay, and i'm sure everything will turn out all right in the end.
2008-10-05


amandeep
i dont know whats happening ..

i wrote a long comment and the site showd me an error this happened me before

i hope that my comment will have been reached to u
2008-10-05


amandeep
i dont know whats happening ..

i wrote a long comment and the site showd me an error this happened me before

i hope that my comment will have been reached to u
2008-10-05


amandeep
first of all

welcome to poetbay, bay of love

we are so pleased to have u as a writer on this site

today i was reading ur poem
this poem is excellent..full of emotion..and very touching..i like the whole poem and the emotions by which u have writtten this poem..i just can imagine those moments..how cute !! how sweet those moments will be!!! last slice of pizz, not more than one samosa...haha (samosas are my fav)...those happy precious moments of diwali and fun on holi...everything .....u penned down very well

this poem was so touching and so lovely..u expressed those moments that we forget sometime..u bring that moments before me..


i must bookmark this.. and this poem goes to my fav.

beside all this i must not forget that while writing this poem you were crying..

i hope that he'l be fine and will come back soon ...and those nine months will go just like a blink of an eye..

best wishes to u and him

regards
amandeep
2008-10-05


amandeep
first of all

welcome to poetbay, bay of love

we are so pleased to have u as a writer on this site

today i was reading ur poem
this poem is excellent..full of emotion..and very touching..i like the whole poem and the emotions by which u have writtten this poem..i just can imagine those moments..how cute !! how sweet those moments will be!!! last slice of pizz, not more than one samosa...haha (samosas are my fav)...those happy precious moments of diwali and fun on holi...everything .....u penned down very well

this poem was so touching and so lovely..u expressed those moments that we forget sometime..u bring that moments before me..


i must bookmark this.. and this poem goes to my fav.

beside all this i must not forget that while writing this poem you were crying..

i hope that he'l be fine and will come back soon ...and those nine months will go just like a blink of an eye..

best wishes to u and him

regards
amandeep
2008-10-05