wrote this last year at the beginning :)


I hate saying goodbye (cliche poem)..

I forgot to say goodbye my love

Forgot to blow a kiss

Trudged to the door I waved, my love

I always leave like this

 

So come, my love, whatever may

Lets wash our tears 'neath this sad day

Lets talk the long dull hours away

Come, what may

 

 I dont know if truth is what you'll hear

Don't know if you are ready

I long to tell, to be sincere

But only if you'll let me

 

I'm not worth your deep smiling eyes

Not worth your dark demeanor

I long to drop my senseless lies

And tell the story clearer

 

So come, my love, whatever may

Lets wash our tears 'neath this sad day

Lets talk the long dull hours away

Come, what may

 

My soul slips softly sound asleep

My eyes close tight rond your last gaze

Your face floats when my vision's weak

Your prize the end of the maze

 

I wish once more that Icould tell

What words fail miserably to entail

Shall we weave a senseless spell

Or fall to love and never fail





Poetry by Joe Fern
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Written on 2008-11-14 at 03:44

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Dee Daffodil
I think this one should win a gold star ! But...that's just me. I happen to know someone who doesn't say "goodbye", and actually wrote a poem called "I'm Afraid to Write a Goodbye Poem"... Nice write Joe !
Hugs,
Dee
2009-01-13


bubble gum
This is so lovely

I'm glad I'm back in this site

there are so many good writers here
2008-11-14


night soul woman The PoetBay support member heart!
Wow! What a song /poem!Excellent! *applause* and *bookmarked* and not it is not a cliche poem:) I insist! :)
2008-11-14