To all my friends:
This is not who you think it is about
III's


We Passed the Other Day (III)

I must say...
I did think that
I was over you, but

We passed the other day...
We glanced at each other and
We said "hey" and I remembered

When we talk
When I see you
When I hear your name

It comes back and I remember...
It was brief but sweet, although
It came to nothing at all

But you are still you
But what I like is still there
But have my feelings really gone away

Can we be friends?
Can I move on?
Can I see clearly?

I don't know...
I still care for you, but
I guess for now, that's all I have to say



Poetry by TubaGiant
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Written on 2008-10-25 at 05:32

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Morgan Cellohead
I like this one a lot. I wish I could make it even that far... I hope you make it farther.
2008-12-09


WildGoose
i must say, i rather like the III's, although if there is a special significance behind them other than the fact that they make a cool style i'm afraid it's lost on me.

you're sure i won't know who it's about?
2008-10-27


Kathy Lockhart
I felt the conflicting emotions and was moved. There is a sweetness, tenderness in your conflict. Honest and sincere.
kathy
2008-10-25


Elizabeth Rose
This was a piece to which I can relate. It is so hard to know what we are capable of after a relationship changes. thanks for posting. Liza
2008-10-25