To be with you (Haiku)

Going forth and back
Am I here or there right now
It makes me dizzy



Poetry by Dalmore
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Written on 2008-11-09 at 15:57

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Rob Graber
I enjoyed this. The title suggests a romantic aim; you might consider "You make me dizzy" for the last line...
2008-11-09