the poem speaks for itself.


Because I could not compete with Skyscrapers and Swing Dancers

[ or: My heart is full of love for you- that I can't use ]


Because now
there is nothing more between us, except,
39 hours and 54 minutes that translates into:
distance


Because this is the last poem
I will ever dedicate to the splendor
that is your existence-
however flawed and creased,
however beautiful and eternal


Because every night I spend, restless
drinking with the moon, watching
as he molds the sky in likeness of your body-
contorts your torso like clouds until
they weep lightning

Because the bed will never
smell of your sweat, and my pillow
will forget the fragrance of
your breath-
and because tonight,
the first time in a long time;
the stars outshine your eyes

Because the absolution of death
could not come at a sweeter hour-
the moment after I lit love's pyre
and left your ghost aspiring warmth from itself-

Because I forgive you
for ever loving me at all-
I forgive you because;
the heart loves like fire and
breaks like water




Poetry by Amberlee Carter
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Written on 2005-07-09 at 06:32

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Inked.
"Because I forgive you
for ever loving me at all-"

This line, in particular, stands out.

I really loved this poem.
2005-08-02


StillHoppin The PoetBay support member heart!
breathtakingly good... i like how you note that for the first time in a long time the stars outshine their eyes. i love the opposites of the lines: "however flawed and creased,
however beautiful and eternal" you recognize the good things even as you lament the bad. this is incredibly well written, from the title to the last line, with every stanza in between... good job.
2005-07-09


LurieJune
Sadly beautiful!!!
2005-07-09


chasingtheday The PoetBay support member heart!
ar love - it bends our will at times. death may take our lover at times but the heart remains beating with passions. a good piece, nicely done.
2005-07-09