a contribution to Neph and Lilly's haiku challenge


Prelude To A Storm

Dancing winds spin leaves

Dust rises up and cuts in

Thunder clouds applaud






Poetry by Phyllis J. Rhodes
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Written on 2008-11-15 at 03:27

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Kathy Lockhart
I don't have a haiku challenge but this is great one for the challenge by Nep inspired by Lilly. I suppose you thought I had one because I'd written, 'haiku challenge' by the titles. I did that because nep asked that we indicate that the haiku was for the challenge so he could better keep track of them. LOL

I love this haiku though. Lots of powerful imagery.
love ya,
your sis, the no challenge poet. lol
2008-11-15



like the flow, the sound and the dance. Well done a pleasure to read.
2008-11-15


Stan Cooper The PoetBay support member heart!
Well done, Phyliss...

xxxx Stan
2008-11-15