dotty world


as simple

as a dot



forms a whole



makes a difference



brings an end to things



expectations of what comes next





remains of a fly in a dotty world




Nordsaga 2008



Poetry by Nordsaga
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Written on 2008-11-15 at 18:51

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MissAudreyKaye
The style is very different. I've never read anything quite like this, although I really do like it.

The last line is brilliant.

This poem leaves me wanting more of what you have to say in this piece.

I think the real beauty in the structure is that it visually signals to the reader that there is more to the piece than meets the eye.

Language: 4
Format: 5
Mood: 5
Overall: 4
2008-11-20


Kathy Lockhart
AHHH. ingenious message. I love the title and the fly makes everything new.
2008-11-15