SECRET SIN

Fermenting spring
in the arms of lovers:
a secret sin



Haiku by R.K.Singh
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Written on 2005-07-09 at 08:28

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chasingtheday The PoetBay support member heart!
getting high on the scents spring bring forth, delicious as the fruits of love wink.
2005-07-12


StillHoppin The PoetBay support member heart!
sounds as if springs been bottled and allowed to age until it reaches the point of intoxication... seeing as it's been classified as a sin, it leaves me to wonder if you are highlighting the "evil" side of sin, or the "secret delight" side... i love that about modern haiku, few words = leaving more to the imagination... quite a few thoughts evoked from this, and for that, well done.

8^D

~StillHoppin
2005-07-09


LurieJune
Blossoming love
grasping tight
to what each kiss brings! ~Laura

A smile and a bow to you RK, you inspire me each time I read you!
2005-07-09