Just a thank you to my mum,

and if i got som writing flaws, pleas help me corect them =)


she gave me

She gave me a book , dident think i would read it ,
but hey it dosent hurt to take a look..
i read one line , then another until i was on page two,
suddenly i was in chapter nine, how i got there so quick , dont have a clue.

Thank you mum for giving me this book,
iven if you thougth i would never hear you out ore take a look
i was so into deep , you spoke widom and grace .
Now i can sleep.

So now i see life in a new and difrent way,
im gonna think about gods good wilj and plans every day.
becasue if im tempted to loose faith and hope,
gods words and prommises will help and learn me to cope.

Its al about beliving stronger then strong, to god il dedicate
al my songs , becasue i have gods hands around my mind,
and now al the positive things about me im starting to find..



Poetry by Tamar89
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Written on 2008-12-09 at 18:06

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amandeep
nice ...last stanza was nice and i would suggest u Tamar ... if u wrote the poem directly poetbay ..then write carefully...because there were some typing mistakes in the poem...other wise u can write the poem into the MS word and perfrom a spelling check ...then just copy and paste the poem here...

i hope u'll look after this

by the way
welcome to the bay

regards
amandeep
2008-12-09