it's complicated. but see, the complicated things are the ones that do so well for poetry.


Eyes in My Heart

The moon told me about you.
She did.
She looked me in the face and told me.
"Though you are scared" she said
"I'll help you."
"I am your sign,
I am your signal"

I asked her, how can I be sure?
She replied
"if you have eyes in your heart, open them"
I did.

My eyes saw her.
They saw Him,
and they saw you.



Poetry by Inchworm
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Written on 2009-02-09 at 01:06

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Inchworm
Thank you all so much... I hadn't been online in a while and I completely missed these comments!! In the end the moon was right, but the answer wasn't what I was expecting haha... I may write a sequel to this one in a bit, but I have to see whether I feel the inspiration or not. In any case, thank you!!!
2009-03-01


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2009-02-12



I loved this, so sweet so uncomplicated, despite the complications that created it. Liking the title also...Yes the eyes are the window on the soul, so they must be able to see from the heart. Smiling at you, tai
2009-02-09


Rob Graber
Nice progression in this; touching.
2009-02-09