damnit i miss her...


tonight's haiku

I wish you were here
Tucked closely against my chest
Shutting out the sun




Poetry by David W Durney
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Written on 2009-02-10 at 10:00

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I love haiku and I love this sort of most romantic haiku...damnit i miss him, only thing to do is write a romantic haiku like you David.

Thanks for sharing your lovely muse

Smiling at you

Tai
2009-02-10


Northlight
I do love Haiku, I try them once in
a while myself, not so easy as it looks!
Its a miss her at night" Haiku,
may I gently make a suggestion:
Last line: looking into stars!
Hope you don`t feel bad about my thought
it was so well meant. Haiku to you, /N.
2009-02-10


Kathy Lockhart
so many scenes, so many emotions--vivid imagery!
2009-02-10