Don't know what to say about this poem actually.. Just came to me as i sat here..


Hollow Existence

Walking the path,

the path of another life,

looking at all life left behind,

it makes you wonder,


Life can be taken fast,

faster then you can imagine,

and all so sudden,

it gives you doubt,


So unreal the feeling is,

empty in a way,

don't know what to do,

it makes you nervous,


At the end of the day,

you sit down,

staring empty in to the screen,

It makes you think even more,


The answer?

Don't know,

I'm seeking it myself,

It makes us all think



Poetry by Alexander
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Written on 2006-01-31 at 22:10

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lynn
i think that everybody at least once in there lofe has felt nothingness an alone i know i have but what a good poem. keep it up i love your poems they are so good!!
2006-02-01


lynn
i thimk that everybody at least once in there lofe has felt nothingness an alone i know i have but what a good poem. keep it up i love your poems they are so good!!
2006-02-01


Celtic boy
I walk this lonely road, the only road that I have ever known... (Boulevard of broken dreams - Green day)
Like that song(one of my favourites), your poem reminds us that not one of us knows where our road will finally take us, but we still walk along it into our tomorrows.
Again, it made me think, Thank you for sharing this my friend.
2006-01-31