http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TY3F5A9L3V0


The golden rule of Getting older (Faking a Limerick!)


Once upon a time there was a bunch of hilly billies
who tried to get rid off, of what now. gave them the willies
- their vintage porn collection -
who happens to be the only illustrative form of intimate affection
they ever felt the need to recreate, reciprocate in the kingdom of prefabricated lies



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Written on 2009-05-09 at 14:14

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Elle The PoetBay support member heart!
lol, this did make me smile - its not a limerick but it is in the heart of limerick and it is tongue in cheek :-)

Elle x
2009-05-09



I am not sure what this is about, apart from sad old gits NSW, but I loved the video...yummy

In perfect tune.

Smiling at you

Tai
2009-05-09


night soul woman The PoetBay support member heart!
Thank you Nick:) Next time I will try to follow the rules, thank you for your useful explanation and btw hehe I am going to change the title;) :)
2009-05-09


NicholasG
The idea is good.
Classic limericks have a syllable count of
9
9
5
5
9

although I've often seen
8
8
5
5
8

I suppose it works if lines 1, 2 and 5 are equal in syllables
as well as lines 3 and 4 being the same.

There must be a cartain bounce to it though!
:-) Nick
2009-05-09


Eli The PoetBay support member heart!
:)
2009-05-09