Rwanda's Rue

You tribed against me
And my family and friends:
You machetéed
Them to their ends
But I was spared
To remember
The images
Of dismember.

I didn't cry
Because there was no one
There to hold me;
To call me brother or son
And to take away
Just some of the weight
Of these strokes
Of hate.

I wasn't caught;
I was in the bush
And, in spite of these neighbours knowing me,
Their rush
Passed me by.
I was eight then and now;
Although I have twenty-three years
My brow
Has stayed there
On that afternoon
Of thinking:
My turn soon.

My turn did not come
On that forsake;
But has come ever since
With every wake.

13:09, Thu. 09/04/2009.




Poetry by Mark J. Wood
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Written on 2009-05-22 at 12:25

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Dee Daffodil
Horror and anguish relived each and every day... I like the smooth flowing style of this poem.
Hugs,
Dee
2009-05-22


CC
painful. emotional. very well written
2009-05-22


Marie Cadavieco The PoetBay support member heart!
This is an emotive subject; I am intrigued by the language you have created, e.g. 'you tribed against me', and the sense that this young 'brother/son' has remained, as it were, frozen in time, unable to move on or grow up. It is a phenomenon of such extreme trauma. You have climbed into the skin of this individual so that he is real to the reader.
I like the use of rhyme within a structure which is so free.
2009-05-22