How I feel when I think about that day....


Speechless

I am speech less-
Less speech.
Timid,afraid,silent.
This thing....
I cannot say it,
only think it.
It leaves me
Speechless.


You said.
I agreed.
We went.
You turned.
I turned.
Telepathical silence.
Now,I am speechless.


Who was it that said it?
That a multitude is said,
Amidst the greatest silence?
What was this fate
That our paths crossed....
To bring silence
In my shattered world-
To make me see
What others see not.


You saw.
I felt.We knew.
This our secret it is.
When together we are..
Less speech.
Speech less.
I am speechless.



Poetry by she
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Written on 2006-02-03 at 08:28

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ken d williams The PoetBay support member heart!
In this poem I see much , I thought not of love . I thought of events , of two people seeing a light in the eyes of each other. Seeing in each other a common goal .Of hope , walking side by side. I love this poem , as you can read it has a story building with in me.

Welcome to the 'Bay'.
Ken D Williams
2009-07-12


Eli The PoetBay support member heart!
Very pure expression; Thank You.
2009-07-10


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2009-07-05



I saw one typo in there 'thing' instead of think she! falling in love is a wonderfully private telepathic thing.

When the souls entwine i
n the hearts of the sublime.
They are always together.
Forever in time.

Speechless is the key
Silence just breaths loves song.

Love your style

Tai
2007-02-16


Malin Johansson
Very good poem... I got some pictures in my head when I red this...
2006-04-04


Zoya Zaidi
"SPEACHLESS!"
That is what it leaves me!

W-E-L-C-O-M-E
T-O
T-H-E
B-A-Y!!!

Dear SHE!

(Are you sure you have just joined, haven't I seen that 'SHE' before?...De'-ja' vu...?)

Love,
xxx, Zoya
2006-02-04


liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
I agree with Rik.
It is a very well written poem
Welcome to the bay ^_^
Liz.
2006-02-04


Rik The PoetBay support member heart!
Hmmm!

I have read this many times. Every time teases a shiver from me. There are ghosts here, lurking between every word. This is beautifully wrought and very clever.

A tantalising secret. Its whispers echo in my past. I can't quite explain it, like seeing a familiar face dancing in a crowded street, one second it was there and then it's gone but not the feelings. The feelings linger like those felt when you wake abruptly from an intense dream.

I think i will just have to read it a few more times.

Thank you :-)
2006-02-04