passion and pain

I am Worlds In Distance through passion and pain,
Searching for Question's when the answer is never the same,
can you decipher the problems I gain
Or will you just add to the torment in my brain?

If you could witness the lover in me,
We would sing our favourite songs for ever.
I never want to leave this girl behind me
She can feel it, our love is clear.




Poetry by Nige
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Written on 2009-06-30 at 17:04

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liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
I like the break up of the rhyme
structure in the 2nd stanza as
it[for me] adds to the flow.

This is my fave line:
"Or will you just add to the torment in my brain?"

~L.~
2009-07-06