Inspired by the sometimes series


Sometimes i feel i am a fire

Sometimes i am a fire
Calling carelessly with my warmth
Beautiful flames dancing gayly
Bright and full drawing attention
Welcoming all to reach out and feel

Sometimes i feel like the fire
Necessary, needed, cared for..admired
Alive, vivacious yearning for more
Licking slowly then fast at everything
Eager for new things restlessly

Sometimes i do like a fire
Burn and destroy hopes of those
That dare come too close to my heart
Leaving darkness and ash in my wake
Protecting myself to keep on burning

Sometimes i burn like fire
Fast pacing, heat spreading
Panting, surging forward
Consuming internally eager to share
Quenched only by more

Sometimes i die like a fire
Small embers burning slowly
Spirits dampened no expectations
My energy fueled no more, all spent
Retreat withing myself and die silently.




Poetry by Kat
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Written on 2006-02-06 at 12:13

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Finnman
This was good.......I enjoyed reading it...got the image of You dancing on flames =) Poem is happy, sad, even start of it erotic..
2006-02-16


kip
...Sometimes i feel iam the wood
right beneath you my fire,
dried from the oak tree
that was once the shade
in my backyard...

...you have done great poetic justice to the sometimes i feel... series...well in...
2006-02-08


Zoya Zaidi
Sometimes I feel I am the oil.
Off linseed, suflower, olive or whatever,
Fueling you my dear fire, myself burning
Along entire, going with you higher & higher,
Self cosuming with desire, till we are
but one my fire,
How we get along togather, like two
houses on fire,
When we meet, you light my fire, I set fuel
to your fire,
You and me, when get toghether, we can paint the town entire, Red, the colour of you fire!
Oh! How I would love to be, fuel to you dear fire!

((((Hugs for that excellent write dear Kat!))))))

Very good flow & rhythm, very orignal anology!
I am sooo impressed with your skill & imagination!
Honestly speaking, I was unaware of your immense talent, this is an eye opener!
May God bless you!!!!

I love this part:
"Sometimes i burn like fire
Fast pacing, heat spreading
Panting, surging forward
Consuming internally eager to share
Quenched only by more"

xxx, love, Zoya

ps.I hope you don't mind my dity in answer?
2006-02-06


penfold18
I think you have captured the essence of this,well done.
2006-02-06