His Right

He has every right, to tell you what to do,
because He is our God, and created you.
But before you say, that just makes me a slave,
remember that to you and I, choice He gave.
And all that He asks, is for your own good,
for He loves you, which is why listen you should.
Never will he give, an unreasonable demand,
and if it seems that way, even willing is He, to give a hand.
For no desire has He, to see you fail,
so guidence He offers, to help prevail.
And if you follow the perfection of His ways,
shall you have joy, through lifes maze.
But downsides there are, to doing as we please,
such as worry, hate, war and disease.
But the worst of all, is that you will die,
and to another lost soul, must He say goodbye.
Which is why care you must, for He cares what you do,
and is concerned you'll perish, having not forgiven you.



Poetry by someone else
Read 547 times
Written on 2009-07-06 at 21:19

dott Save as a bookmark (requires login)
dott Write a comment (requires login)
dott Send as email (requires login)
dott Print text



this is ok, I must say (damnit).
can we have some more of that caring quality that you have a tendency to neglect sometimes?
more care, less scare. thank you.
2009-07-07