triku, my invention, three related haikus
(New Smyrna Beach, Florida is the shark bite capital of the world)


Vacation's Observations

roaring of the sea

mind and body tension free

lull-a-by for me




breeze sweet and balmy

landscape dark green and loamy

waves high and foamy



sand white and sparkling

bird-chasing Shepherd barking

bold waders sharking






Poetry by Phyllis J. Rhodes
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Written on 2009-07-14 at 22:54

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sounds like a awesome beach in Florida too. wowo. Thanks for sharing this it has bounce and full of fun.
2009-07-15


Kathy Lockhart
Love it! You describe it so well in your trikus.
The last time I was there, a boy was bitten by a shark on his ankle. I went screaming into the water to retrieve our grandnephew who was oblivious to it all. Thank God the boy was alright and the shark was not headed in the same direction as I and our nephew were.
2009-07-15


normalil
I can't do haikus, but loved reading these. Perfect. Glad to hear the vacation was good...
2009-07-14