It Was

It was a sleep
A deep slumber he would like to dream of
It was like calm after a storm
A sense of security that was felt
It was to last half a day
But it was to remember the next twelve hours
It was acceptance after a complaint.

It was a dream
A work of imagination he would like to fantasize
It was like a roll of a never ending film
Capturing and recording every little action
It was a story puzzled in his mind
The best memory that would never be forgotten
It was an assurance after being doubtful.

It was a fantasy
A new world he would like to create
It was an escape from cruelty
A place with all the bright colors dancing
A haven with all the prettiest creatures sharing beauties
A humble seat beside the Greatest Man above
It was a freedom after a self-imprisonment.

It was waking up
Opening his sea-grey eyes he would like to close a minute more
It was like a nightmare in disguise
A dead photography he couldn't abandon
An asylum he couldn't leave
It was a lifetime trip to hell
But it was like a forever after a sickening death.

It was like a genuine truth
But it was just a posing lie
Most of all, it was like a taste of sweet perfection
But it was a real dinner of bitter reality.




Poetry by Jean Thomas
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Written on 2009-07-21 at 14:37

Tags Sleep  Awaken  Reality 

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Phyllis J. Rhodes
An original telling of an old story. We think, if only..... or there's no hope so..... or things will be better if...... and then we make decisions based on fantacy which leads to tragedy and further desention into a kind of maddness that propells us to run harder away from life. This is a captivating work that speaks volumes.
2009-07-21


liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
Love the last two stanzas

~L.~
2009-07-21