I Love you Lova

You taught me
I tell you
How to simply just be
together with a human being
The most beautiful experience I now know
Before your eye I was born
I don't know if your eyes noticed me dying
Now
after all this emptiness and pain
I have started loving you as beautiful as before
but its a new way



Poetry by MeisI
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Written on 2009-08-15 at 00:20

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Phyllis J. Rhodes
What makes this so compelling is its brevity. The entire history of a relationship and its affect on you is made clear to the reader in so few lines. I applaud you.
2009-08-15