reflection of a swan

A swan can be compared with many things.

Clean, innocent
- White

Like her dress that was white and the gracefull wind that caressed it as she ran.

Her golden locks danced through sleaky fingertips

Her eyes, like violets, or deep water

A swan indeed, innocent

- in what you could see

Like her dress that was white and the gracefull whind ripped it while she ran from her past

Her golden locks danced through sleaky fingers and bathed in tears.

Her eyes, like violets, or deep water, the water she longed to fall in.

A swan can be compared to so many things.


Dirty, broken
- Dark




Poetry by Ace
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Written on 2006-02-10 at 11:48

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Zoya Zaidi
It is so beautiful !
Though last to lines a re bit of an anti climax!
Why "dirty, broken, dark"?
May be you would explain?
2006-02-14