Another place, another time . . .




Sequences of music
sweet whisper's the wind
soul mates with the sun
and the moon

Another time and
another place
of traveling
and living

Outreaching thoughts
delivering capabilities
of human behaviors

Walking feet's and
clapping hand's
blinking eyes
and a smile

thats all . . .

Another place and
another time

Sitting on a star
hitchhiking in space
in my own thoughts

Something inside:
my soul whisper

- Live for today!




and do it well . . .






















Poetry by Dan Cederholm
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Written on 2009-09-02 at 15:41

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shells
Oh well now you've got it twice!! It still comes up on my screen as a fatal error, but obviously is still sending the messages anyway, I expect it will sort itself out.
2009-09-03


shells
Reading this gave me the feeling of wide open spaces, something ethereal about this piece, loved the punchline at the end. Tried to send "by message on poetbay.com, but it comes up with fatal error line 51! so thought I would tick the "by email box" to see if I can comment that way.
2009-09-02


shells
I just get the feeling of wide open spaces when reading this, something ethereal about the piece, loved the punch line at the end.
2009-09-02


Phyllis J. Rhodes
Lyrical muse of excellence. It had me floating above my chair as I read.
2009-09-02


Phyllis J. Rhodes
I found myself floating a few inches above my chair as I read this lyrical muse. A very pleasant way to start my day. Congratulations on the excellence of this work.
2009-09-02