The blue sky

When thoughts are allowed

to dissolve into pure consciousness

like clouds dispersed in a sky

there will be a knowing

without thinking

and the blue sky

the underlying stillness

will be seen

the light will shine

from the clear blue sky

a grace of simplicity so high

far away from every confusing lie.





Poetry by Nils Teodor The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2009-10-23 at 22:20

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John Ashleigh
To feel as one with the contents and beauty of nature - this poem flows off the tongue - a desirable place in time of essence. Thankyou for sharing!

Regards,
John.
2010-11-21



You have captured that sense of consciousness as something ethereal, as real as clouds, which says a lot. This poem is very soft, it flows gently, a meditative stream of thought.
2009-10-24



phew! a breath of fresh air.

thank you for taking me back to where the sky is so blue.

A favourite read in my heart.

Smiling at you

Tai
2009-10-24


Rob Graber
The imagery, and the expanding triplet ending, really work here. Nice write!
(PS: Line 2 needs "dissolve.")
2009-10-23