A crying shame, literally. Every word below is worth a thousand tears.


Bad timing



Now it seems
That all our hopes and dreams
Have come to naught, and I am struck dumb.

Although the thought of final days makes my heart numb,
I realize at long last that the time has come.

I am losing you, my Sweetest Spring,
For such a stupid thing:
Bad timing.




Poetry by TonyD
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Written on 2009-10-26 at 00:29

Tags Love  Loss  Timing 

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Bjanka
....there's nothing more I could add after this thorough comment....beautifully written....
2009-10-26



Poignant and exquisitely painful words, beautifully formed. The thing that gets me about bad timing, is that I believe all timing is in tune with our destiny, so even though it is bad, it is essential to lead us further down our destined path.

i do suffer from bad timing sometimes, as we all do, and I have shed a thousand rivers of tears as a consequence. What could have been, always on our minds.

Smiling at you

Tai
2009-10-26