Another shore

Life is beautiful and fragile

like a dewdrop on a trembling leaf

Death might be seen as an evil thief

but a silent mind and an open heart

might make you start 

to find beauty everywhere

and when the flame of a candle is no more

dawn has arrived on another shore.





Poetry by Nils Teodor The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2009-10-26 at 21:14

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John Ashleigh The PoetBay support member heart!
A beautifully written poem. Thanks for sharing!

Regards,
John.
2010-12-01


J. E.
This is pure wisdom, with two excellent ending lines! Beautiful and true. Applause!
2010-07-11


Joan Black
Good poem, very nice!
2010-02-14



The last two lines make the first six come alive.
2009-10-27