A fire of bliss

When the rays of light

are focused enough

they can burn a hole

or light a fire

When the light of attention

is purely focused

on the source of awareness itself

the boundless sky of the soul

might open like a flower of love

a fire of bliss

a wonderful indescribable kiss





Poetry by Nils Teodor The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2009-10-27 at 10:13

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binesh
Magnificent piece of work. Really good....
2009-10-29


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2009-10-28


P K Padhy
Many congratulations for your poem. I liked the use of metaphor in its true sense. It is indeed a fire of bliss!

Dr P K Padhy
2009-10-27



Yes indeed. I can say that I have received one of those kisses, directly from heaven. This poem speaks of that place where in Tai Chi Meditation, with practice, we find ourselves...

Perfect clarity and Yesssssssssss! if feels like a fire of bliss.

Great work.

Smiling at you

Tai
2009-10-27


Eli The PoetBay support member heart!
Your poems are wonderful, everyone of them; simple, beautiful and important affirmations. Thank You again. : )
2009-10-27