Perfection is Imperfection

Perfection comes to those
Less fortunate in the blood line of
Humanity.
Because those of ne plus ultra
Seem to have more problems
And insanity.
They don't have the strength
To go on without that extra
Bridge to cross
They don't have the mind
To know that having everything
Doesn't make you boss
They don't have the emotion
To know that love isn't bought
It's given
And they dont know how to drive
When they need to be
Driven.

Perfection is imperfection
At its finest




Poetry by Sarah Mae~
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Written on 2009-11-21 at 06:04

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"They don't have the mind
To know that having everything
Doesn't make you boss
They don't have the emotion
To know that love isn't bought
It's given " -

I read this passage and my thoughts trailed on it being observations on people who may lack the finer points of what's truly important in life when everything just comes to them so easily for being from a privileged background that they don't realize they are uneducated about life and what most other people's lives are truly like.

The whole of the text makes me interpret the 'perfection' to be shallowness of mind and heart.

I really liked the opening lines and of course the closing lines reflect well your desire to not attain that 'perfection'. I sure wouldn't either. A thought-provoking write this was for me, so thanks again for letting me ramble my thoughts your way :) :fm xx
2009-11-22