Grief stridden

Thick viscous drops of tear
I swallow
To subside the
Burns of sorrow.
The run-off,
The lonely companion
Of my tired swollen eyes,
Escapes my inner vision
In search of the sun in dark.
"Is death a gift of sacrifice
For taking a rebirth?"




Poetry by P K Padhy
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Written on 2009-11-22 at 11:53

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'"Is death a gift of sacrifice
For taking a rebirth?"

Wow, what a question, so well formulated and the whole poem builds up the mood and enhances the effect of the final question. Very well written!Thanks for sharing*aplause*
2009-11-26