It's a simple welcome...


Welcome



The grass is green
And smell freshly mown
Small red and white flowers
Peek out as the sun rises
It's morning
It's the welcome to Spring
Welcome to love, warmth and music
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Welcome to life...



Poetry by Amy Valentina
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Written on 2009-12-07 at 11:53

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cory Crook
Spring is the new beginning of many many things its the greatest gift
2010-01-07


P K Padhy
Good attempt. It reflects the sublime beauty of nature.You may use some similies to make it more poetic.
Best wishes

Dr P K Padhy, India
2009-12-07


Achernar
on, this is a most lovely poem, indeed!! I really enjoyed it! (where I am winter has begun in full force and it is plenty cold!
2009-12-07