Well, I believe that love is patient and Kind...
However, this poem is inspired by a short message (SMS) that I received. And I felt that it is true that love does not understand any barriers but crosses through everything and reached the most neglected


Love is illiterate...



Someone wrote on the door of the heart
"Please, do not enter.""
Love came smiling and said,
"Sorry, I am illiterate."
It entered into the most hardened of hearts
Smiled sweetly and said, "I love you".
It was shouted down with a string of abuses
Yet it kept smiling and said,
"Wow, I never heard any of these before. But surely, it seems you love me so much.
I just used three words and you kept going on and on."
Irritated and flushed red, the hardened heart managed a smile and said,
"It's not love. I was abusing you."
Love became excited and jumping up and down said something one could never imagine,
"So you are blushing now and smiling back and say it isn't love."
Fuming with rage, the hardened heart caught hold of love.
But before it could say anything, Love chirped in,
"O' so now you are holding me and I know you'll never let me go."




Poetry by Amy Valentina
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Written on 2010-01-12 at 06:55

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A perfect and beautiful little poem on love. I adore it because it says it all about loving and its power to change us and our worlds, no matter the barriers.

Lovely to read you. I am impressed on how you dealt with such inspiration of a short message.

Smiling at you

Tai
2010-01-16


zaipoems
so sweet

nice write !
2010-01-16


F.i.in.e Moods The PoetBay support member heart!
Yes, there's nothing like love. This is an endearing expression bringing smiles my way. Love is kind and patient, and never far around the corner either - so true. Beautiful :) :fm xx
2010-01-15



so sweet!
love this piece.
keep it up!
-killy
2010-01-14


Purple Phoenix
This is gorgeous! Loved it! Applauded! :-)
2010-01-12